Friday, February 3, 2012

Cover Art Candidate

Picture above is the current candidate for the cover of the upcoming Shades anthology. Click the picture for a larger view. Please everybody, let me know what you think. I'm still at the stage I can change things, if I need to.

I think the first sentence of the blurb may be problematic.


  1. Yep. First sentence seems too long. Maybe a period after "dark room" and then began a new sentence.

    I'm not fond of the centered text. Just me, possibly.

  2. I agree about the centered text- not sure about that.

    I also don't usually take my reading lamp around the house. Maybe lock the doors, but that won't help because ghosts don't care (or something). The nightlights are a good way to go :).

    I'm also pretty wordy, but I've never heard revenants. Cool word, but I had to read that sentence a few times to figure it out.

    Looks awesome- my girl said 'scary' as she looked over my shoulder.