Picture above is the current candidate for the cover of the upcoming Shades anthology. Click the picture for a larger view. Please everybody, let me know what you think. I'm still at the stage I can change things, if I need to.
I think the first sentence of the blurb may be problematic.
Yep. First sentence seems too long. Maybe a period after "dark room" and then began a new sentence.
ReplyDeleteI'm not fond of the centered text. Just me, possibly.
I agree about the centered text- not sure about that.
ReplyDeleteI also don't usually take my reading lamp around the house. Maybe lock the doors, but that won't help because ghosts don't care (or something). The nightlights are a good way to go :).
I'm also pretty wordy, but I've never heard revenants. Cool word, but I had to read that sentence a few times to figure it out.
Looks awesome- my girl said 'scary' as she looked over my shoulder.
:).