At the moment, I’m kinda struggling with a novel I’m working
on. I have a basic idea of what’s going to happen, and I have some rather
potent and memorable scenes pictured. But at the same time, I’m having to stop
and rethink the whole thing because I haven’t truly figured out what the novel
is about. Knowing what the book is about goes a long way toward
helping me write it. And what I’m talking about isn’t the surface plot and
situation.
For instance, Spiderstalk has giant spiders, superhuman
mutants, and secret societies, but what it’s really about is a man who lost
nearly everything finding himself and a reason to live again. Adam has given
up, and only uses his brother’s disappearance as a crutch to keep going. His
fixation on rescuing Tucker is authentic, but also serves the selfish purpose
of motivating him forward. It’s only when he faces the Matriarch and truly has
to decide who he is, that he finally makes a defining non-selfish choice
that means he can now move forward with life as a better man.
Dead Stop has graveyard zombies surrounding a truckstop and
people fighting for their lives…but what it’s really about is Deke overcoming his
self-doubt and illusions of other people, Rachel overcoming her grief and
finding her way back to the things that made her strong, and Marisa finding the
ability to allow herself to trust and lean on somebody else.
Even Cargill from The Ways of Khrem has a character arc, as
he initially and shamelessly makes all his decisions based on his own self-interest,
but as the story unfolds he begins to get in touch with the past that hardened
him and uses that as motivation to act in a way to set things right. He will
always be cynical, sarcastic, and opportunistic, but at the same time he is
adding dimensions that allows him to act on better impulses…even if
reluctantly. (This novel should be republished this fall)
A novel is a story of
a character, and losing sight of that is the prelude to a novel in trouble. So
I’m backing up and rethinking my characters. It’s a delay, and may involve
going back and rewriting from an earlier
point in the novel, but that’s okay. In the end it’s about the finished
product, and giving the reader a journey that’s not only exciting, but has a
little substance.
Ah well, back to work.
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