Okay, the first edit of The Ways of Khrem is done. I squashed a lot of problems, and improved the flow of the story.
Stage Two is about to begin.
I will be creating book quotes to act as headings for chapters, and will also be looking at possible insertions to round out certain areas. I will also be paying particular attention to the early part of the story, since I am very content with the ending.
I'm going back in. Wish me luck.
Hang in there, Big Guy--you're almost done!
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Cherri
Thanks. I'm really looking forward to finishing this. I think this rewrite and these additions are going to improve things immensely.
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