One of the things
writers are often encouraged to do is to read other peoples books or go watch
movies in the same genre you write in. The idea isn’t always just for
inspiration, but also to recharge in a way. Sometimes you get inspiration
anyways, and that is always a bonus.
With that in mind, I
went to my local movie theater and sat down to watch the movie Sinister.
The good news is
that I actually found the experience both useful and enlightening, and it gave
me much to think about writing wise. The bad news is that it was mainly due to
me sitting there recognizing one thing after another that the movie did wrong,
or I would do differently.
Overall, the movie starts
out with a solid premise. A crime writer moves into a house where a family was
murdered years ago, as added inspiration for writing a book about the event. So
far, so good…but almost immediately it falls foul of one of my axioms of good
horror movies/writing. That axiom is “Everytime your story depends on your
protagonist either acting a jerk or being an idiot in order for the situation
to work, you weaken your story.”
And in Sinister’s
case the first violation of that rule is the main character keeping it secret
from his family that this is the house where the crime he was writing about
happened. Yeah, okay. The reason given is his obsession with writing another
bestseller since it’s been so long since the last one…but it just never felt
convincing. Then, when he finds a mysterious box with a movie projector and
films…and they turn out to be films of previous murders…does he turn this new
evidence over to the police? Nope. He keeps them to himself for the same reason.
Again, even an obsessed man would realize he wouldn’t be able to use it in his
book because he would get busted right away. Not our boy. And of course, it’s
never really dealt with.
Then, along with
these actions which really sort of took me out of the movie, I got treated to a
few scenes which have me considering a NEW axiom for supernatural horror
movies. That tentative axiom goes “Ghosts and other supernatural manifestations
should be witnessed by the audience along with the character.”
There were several
scenes where the protagonist walks past a ghost without seeing it, or the
audience being treated to an appearance of the ghost without the main
characters knowledge. For some reason, the only effect of that to me was this
feeling that the audience was being let it on something the character wasn’t
aware of and it wasn’t very scary at all.
I kept thinking how
they might be trying to imitate a scene like the one in Halloween where Nancy
Loomis’s character walks past the French doors and the serial killer is
standing in them, then turns around and walks past them again and now he’s
gone. If so, then it’s a mistake because the context is different, meaning the
scene can’t be that effective with a ghost. With a serial killer, you know he’s
still there somewhere and wondering if he’s around every corner the potential
victim turns. With a ghost, it just means it’s vanished.
To me, unwitnessed
ghosts just don’t work.
Anyways, by now I
supposed you can figure out that I’m not recommending this movie. Despite what
should have been a good setup for a horror movie, it just wrecked itself in too
many ways. It depended too much on the main character acting an idiot even when
his kids are having problems, and the excuse for that idiocy just didn’t seem
that convincing.
Two thumbs down, on
Sinister.
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